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    wolf
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    Konoha Genin
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    Post by wolf Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:08 pm

    Pet's Name: Archer

    Looks:Wolf's snake done Burmes10
    it is around 5-6 ft with a red and black with zig zag pattren

    How Did you get: Wolf was walking through the forest and found him the snake made his way over and climbed up his leg to his arm and rubed his head on Wolfs arm so wolf decided to keep him he trained him to taste a enemys scent and to crush them on his command

    How does it help you?:Archer can taste enemys scents by 3-5 yards and is a boa so he can crush them by wraping him self around a part of the body and sqeezing he can allso tell when something is wrong

    Description:He glares and shows his fangs to pepole he dont like he is always around Wolfs arm and well go off his arm and go onto other pepole who he likes


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    Medusa
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    Post by Medusa Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:05 am

    ~ Please add how big the snake is in measurements of length and width, etc, also add more detail into how far it can taste enemy scents, whether by meters or inches, whatever.
    Initake
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    Post by Initake Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:47 pm

    Try to add more of looks description, describe the pattern more, and describe just how powerful it really may be Describe a little more how it "crushes" the enemies. Also, it would be very good to give the pet some jutsu, in case you may ever need it.
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    Post by Roxas Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:30 pm

    He doesn't have to describe the pattern, he has a picture. o.o

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